Question:

Please tell me what you think of this poem.?

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Now someone i know wrote these tell me what you think of them and warning some are a bit provocative:

a woman's worth

People don't make you think you're worth it but I think you are

I'm not a band but like Earth, Wind & Fire you're my shinning star

Never believed someone could ever love me till I look at you

You give me butterflies like Michael Jackson when you call me boo

You give me indentations of a smile cross my face

Wherever back you make happiness shine in its place

You showed me that its possible that i can be loved

They must not know Im baptist and will tear dat booty up

But all jokes aside you're worth more than you could ever imagine

Just think you didnt think you could find love and look at us we made a year + happen

The storm pt.1

As it rains outside I concentrate on the four walls sorroundings my manhoodWith every exhale there is a thump to music making it seem like we're in the hoodI thrust forward as you fall back on my fingertips as they pick up the slackAfter the full course meal of your nipples and navel next is the abandoned pussycatThe rain sorrounding outside floods the street as you grip sheets wit toes on ur feetNow you sit on my lap grindin with hips but I bend you back for a taste and a treatI l**k and rotate and finger and suck and sweat drips down your spine 2 the bedI speed up the rhythm 2 keep up outside between your legs as you grab my headAround us the rain stops as I slow down the rhythmic pace of my lips 2 your thighsI rotate my tongue around your nipples forcing ejaculation on your body's rideSatisfaction is obtained from the wetness in your thighs and your eyez teardropsAs we watch the daily news forecast cuddling the forecast says: "THE RAIN STOPS"