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Question

Free

Gone

The wind flies through my hair,

Burns my cheeks,

Flinging away my tears

Blood rushes through my veins,

Heightening my senses.

I move freely with no effort,

I can do anything forever.

My eyes close

I release myself

Energy rushes through every point of me.

I feel my mouth open,

From it, I scream

My emotions streaming out, unwinding.

Now, I am free from

Myself.

Answer 1

its so sad, but also very creative. you should publish it....