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My new jack russel Milo was left on the road in the cold and wet skinny mistreated with a broken leg and fighting for life. i found out my family member dumped him after gettin bored of him and i went to save him. and i did hes now here a happy healthy good boy :)

heres a peom i have wrote for Milo and also for school aboout dumping christmas pups. what do you think? thanks :)

Promised never to let go.

By Janey

I remember the christmas morning

all wraped up in pretty red bow

you picked me and promised never to let go.

You held me close and tight warm and true

i licked your face and i knew i loved you!

i was a little ball of fluff

with puppy eyes with full of love.

You treated me as your baby

Hug cuddles and big kisses and silly games

why has that changed why isnt it the same?

You throw me in your car a look of hated abone your face

my broken leg hurts what did i do? im scared !

i know ive grown, loss my fluff and my puppyness

but not my heart to you.

i lie here in the cold night in the rain on the road

im scared where did you go

you promise me never to let go!

Im hungrey ,wet in pain i feel weak.

i know what i will do I'll remeber last week!

in your arms warm by the fire with my master

please come back i can not go on!

im losing my fight for life!

please dont let this be my last night!

My eyes barley open, i see lights

im i in doggy heaven?

i see a young girl with tears in her eyes with sorrow and pity

she picks me up and whispers

I do promise i will never let you go!

And here i am in her lap happy

im a silly jack russel chappy

i look in her eyes and feel warm

i know she will never let me go!

please listnen to my story when you get a pup

never ever ever let them go!

thanks for reading

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  1. *crying* THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! i hate it when people mistreat animals. You did the right thing


  2. How beautiful! You are a very talented poetess. Milo is one lucky little guy. Be good to each other. XXXOOO for Milo!

  3. what a lovely poem,good very good ,i really loved it.and good for you to be so so kind to your little Jack Russel.

  4. Wow Janey,  God bless you, thank you so much for taking this pup in.  Who was your family member who did this?  This is cruelty to animals, they could be in big trouble for such behavior. I also found a Pekingese in the same condition, that was 4 yrs ago. The people who owned him just up and moved out and just left him on the street in the middle of winter, starving and sick. People!

    Your poem is sooooo beautiful, it gave me a smile.  you should publish it somewhere or enter it in a contest, I think it's a winner.  And so are you.  God Bless you and your boy Milo!

  5. oooh that was a very rare story from you ... please continue to share that kind of responsibility

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