Please write a negative and a positive thing about the poem? FUULL 10 POINTS?

Question

I placed a jar in Tennessee,

And round it was, upon a hill.

It made the slovenly wilderness

Surround that hill.

The wilderness rose up to it,

And sprawled around, no longer wild.

The jar was round upon the ground

And tall and of a port in air.

It took dominion every where.

The jar was gray and bare.

It did not give of bird or bush,

Like nothing else in Tennessee.

Answer 1

Positive : Good use of explanation

Negative : Could use more imagery and concrete language

Answer 2

positive, it made me think

negative what it made me think,