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Please:Comments/ideas on my Sci-Fic English story? Anything(sumary)?

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This very brief just the overall idea.

Please tell me how i can improve, wat to cut out. wat to add.

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Man on Moon

- 2611 ,5000 people go there for a test.

- 1week of perfect success

- moon monster wakes up km away from base

- signs of people disappearing

- rumours began to spread

- a kid was found dead

- people panic

- moon monster first appears.(shadow of the monster)

- attacks the base,

- got reported to earth and a pic of its shadow sent back

- earth sends a robot wif a bomb to blow up the moon

- risk of it traveling back in the space ships , but they took a risk

earth has no more moon

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  1. If you're in grade school, this is awesome.

    If you're in high school, this is terrible

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