Plirz read my poem, suggest a title, and wat yu think its about

Question

Before all goes quiet

And they sprinkle on my box the earth

I’ll stare at the blanket

You call your sky

Before my eyes close

And will tell not a lie

But glare with emptiness

At the carpet on which is built our lair

That if life shall a question pause

And my soul, death cleave from bone

I’ll forever in the thought dwell

I did in your heart belong

I thank you for your kindness

And wish to keep me well

Everyday, with you, was a learning curve

Now I know how to love

And how to hate too

I know to live like a king

One has to be like a slave

And so with wat the best can please

If you should one day feel the need to leave

Hold your feet not to halt

For I tread not with fear of what we may be without

But hope of what may be found

dee

Answer 1

Maybe Control

Answer 2

i like it ...

the fact it hasn't got a title and its not clean what its about gives it that extra mysterious feeling :) well done

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