Plot interesting to make into a book? And if it was a book would you read it?

Question

A girl wakes up one morning and hears a noise in her parents room so she goes and investigates what it is. The television is running and the news is on. At first she was going to turn it off but once she hears the report, she is drawn to listen. She then discovers that four of the boys at a sleepover her brother was attending the previous night were slaughtered and believes her brother is dead along with them. The phone rings. A womans voice comes on who she expects to be the person who call an tell the family that a member had just died. Instead the woman says that she has the girls brother and that she can come get him and to meet her in the forest across the street from her home but to tell no one especially the police. Out of love for her only sibling, she runs from home. While searching for her brother she crosses into another world and is hunted by a werewolf (the summary is an extremely sped up version of my story)and then saved by a group of adolesents who have run from and an age old war that is destroying that world into a possibly more dangerous place (its a forsest that is linked to the one across the street from the girls house.

There is A LOT of more story but i cant say it or type it (im talking really a lot!) So what did you think?

Answer 1

I think it has potential. It reminds me of a few different stories I've already read. But if you like the plot you should write the book whether or not someone will like it. Write it for yourself.  

Answer 2

wow it would be a very big and possibly a little bit confusing. if i were u i would write 2 books: 1: a teenage girl somehow crosses into that other world is saved by the war-torn adolescents in that dangerous place and 2: a teenage girls struggle to release her younger brother from a murderous group of people using the beginning of your idea. i think those are both really good plots and both sound extremely interesting to me. i would read them! good luck and my idea was just a suggestion.  

Answer 3

Hmm...It was sounding really good until you added the werewolves thing in there. If you'll accept a little constructive criticism I would say make it more of a thriller than a fantasy. Theres already to many unrealistic stories out there. And I would read it either way! Good luck!

Answer 4

     I'm not too sure about the werewolf bit.  You could make a really good story out of a straight forward kidnapping.  A gang that targets wealthy families and kidnaps their children for ransom.  The girl can be the heroine and she, with a few friends, hunt down this gang.  Something like that.  Hope it helps.

Good luck

Mike B