Pls Pls Pls help me with this...Who can check my english grammar?

Question

I will tell the story to class, this is a presentation so I must get everything right…

* HELP 1: Help me create the title of this story

* HELP 2: Help me create the farmer and the fairy name (B is the farmer & A is the fairy in the story)

* HELP 3: in 2nd paragraph- One day, B discovered something belongs to the fairy. What should that be?

* HELP 4: Check grammar (as English is not my first language, I translate this story by myself. )

Once upon a time, a young bloke named B who is a very kind and hard working farmer. His parents has died early and he then lived together with his elder brothers. When they divided the family property, B was only given an Old Cow, and his brother expelled him.

One day, B discovered a X on his farm, which is belonged to a fairy named A from the Heaven. Soon after A visited B and asked if he had found it. He lied and told her that he hadn’t but would help with her search. Eventually, the pair fell in love and were shortly married.

Answer 1

never learned to read or write

Answer 2

That's pretty, and all, but part of the story telling is that it has to come from you. You can get all the outside help you want, but it wont sound authentic unless it's something that has come from your mind. You need to think the story through and actually feel it. if you came up with this story then you should already have some of this figured out. I think you might need to open up some of your creatvie genius to figure this one out. It was well written and imaginative, sort of romantic and you spelled everything right, but as far as the help you need, that kind of stuff you need to figure out on your own, b/c if someone else comes up with it for you, it wont feel authentic.

Answer 3

The best grammar trick is to use the same tense in every sentence.  That way it is hard to confuse your readers.  It makes your writing clean and readable.  Make your sentences very simple at first and then expand the ideas.  Remember to use the same verb tense in every sentence.