Pls critique this poem, correctly define the story it tells for 10 pts!?

Question

A Memory

A memory held tightly

A warm summer afternoon

A ride home

A need not remembered

A time not forgotten

A hand held

A breath caught

A heart pounding

A moments thought

A simple shirt

A desire unfulfilled

A chance taken

A time stilled

A safe place

A warm embrace

A kiss moist

A leg soft

A touch

A stroke

A need

A want

A response

A reaction

A force

A wave

A stroke

A touch

A kiss moist

A warm embrace

A heart pounding

A breath caught

A hand held

A warm summer afternoon

A ride home

A need not remembered

A time not forgotten

A memory held tightly

Answer 1

first love, first sexual expeience, I liked it but the first part was a little hard to follow i thought someone was being consoled for the loss of a loved one wasn't until 1/3 way in i realized where it was going. GL!

Answer 2

Well, I personally think that you have stretched the poem a bit long. And all those words ( force, reaction, wave, ...) were too much and one is prone to forget that it is poem at all.

As to the meaning of the poem, I think it narrates about a warm summer afternoon when the author spent some intimate time with an unknown person ( either sexual or just making out ).

  Well, I hope I came up with the right answer.

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