Pls rate my poem.....??????

Question

it's copyrighted

The unkindness of life

Deeply penetrated with red ink

That reminds me of the dreaded you

My eyes callously

Lead me to this love encrusted picture of you

Tattooed on my arm

Permanently

I wish I could erase the memory

But I can’t

It sits deep in my arm

Reminding me of the monsters I faced

The unkind words

An imprint of wars

Of torn up memories

Of messed up promises

Of laughter

Playfulness

Of my disgruntled pleasures

Of my rebellion

An imprint of you

A tattoo of you that can

Never erase the dreaded you.

© 2008 LMN

Answer 1

how is it "your poem" when even youa dmit it's copyrighted???  that means it's not yours... it's the author's!!!

But it's okay

Answer 2

An example of the power of a tattoo. Forever (sometimes) imprinted on the body - as a reminder - of a very special event - hopefully - one that is happy.  For to be trapped - by a unhappy memory - forever - must be living torture ♥