Pls rate this poem with how it makes you feel, like the feelins it evokes & can u tel me how u interpretate it

Question

All my pain will go away

If only you were here to stay

I know your words will make things okay

Because you’ll know just what to say

I keep saying I won’t miss you, I won’t, but it’s all lies

Cause in my head, I keep replaying all our goodbyes

So hard not to think about it, cause with every step I take,

Without you, it feels like it’s all a big mistake,

Heaven knows I’ve been trying

I’m not lying

But it gets awfully hard when your hearts always this broken

Visions of your lovely face as I lay awoken

I have this feeling that you’re here and beside me

It’s so silly of me I know,

And now I see

I gotta face another day, it’s so hard, I’m tired, I need you here again,

To help me wipe away these tears of mine that have become the rain

How am I supposed to carry on?

If I find myself singing the same old song?

If only you’d let me into your heart

That way, we’ll never be apart

Please come back to me

Come and set me free

Cause I’ll be waiting right here if you need someone

I’ll be forever waiting for you Hun,

If you want this love, then don’t go moving on,

If you trust in your heart instead of your head, you can’t go wrong,

It’s not easy, but I’m hoping that I can see the road ahead

Trying hard not to think about the things you said

Feel so alone like a lifetime’s passed

And it’s been a while since I heard from you last

Memories of you still linger

As soon as I thought they were gone, they have only gotten stronger

It’s so hard getting through a day

No matter how hard I try to find another way

It won’t even remove the memories

Seems like they’ll last for centuries

It’s hard to believe I’m lonely; it was always you and I together

Is there gonna be a day where I can hear the words that’ll make me better?

I know there has to be a way so you still need me

Please hold onto this love, this rare anomaly

I thought it was a simple thing, dunno how it got so wrong,

I dunno why it took me so long,

But now I know

How it goes, just let it go

And give you and me a chance

To rekindle our romance

I’ve made up my mind; just need you to make up yours

And maybe this time next week we’ll be together by the sea shores,

I’m hoping I can find the road back to you

Because I trust in this love being true,

But it’s not easy when your heart’s always this murky…

Answer 1

impressive narrative

Answer 2

I think it is very evocative, the imagery is just so sublime. I cannot tell you how much that I love this. Truly talented!

Answer 3

U R expressing the feeling of loosing Ur sweet heart.Is a poem? I'd say no. It 's just U want to talk about it in a form of a column.All there is to it is that U made Ur point here, in a lengthy narration, repeating the same element over & over w/ different words.I 'm sorry, but that is my opinion. If U like poetry, read the works of prominent poets, and keep on writing, let the flow of feelings streams, and don't hold it by rhyme.Good luck!

Answer 4

it sounds like you were together once but then he went away and he does not want anything to do with you anymore...but you still miss the past, and him so you want him back and cant stop thinking of him...it also makes me think you feel somewhat guilty about whatever reason you are not with this person anymore, too bad he is not so into you anymore :(...i know how that feels, even though in my case, it was not my fault.

P.S. The word "hun" does not sound too good in this poem...I personally just hate when anyone calls me that type of words "hun" "sweety" etc ....sounds demeaning :s ....anyway just my personal opinion!!! hope that helps!!