Plss anyone kindly check my spelling, use of English and grammar to my cover letter?

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Plss anyone kindly check my spelling, use of English and grammar to my cover letter?

i am trying to write an excellent cover letter for big4 accounting firms in the aduit or tax area. but my English and grammar is not too good and I think its too wordy .

I have already checked from Ms Word.

Some of the words I used or described may be absence of strong words or not in the right term, you can re-phrase the sentences or use the right wording or cut it short and specific.

Many thanksssssss

Here is the first half of my cover letter:

Answer 1

I'll start by pointing out,,,    You didn't ask a question.

Answer 2

I am responding to your request to fill your Corporate Tax Associate or Audit associate position.

I hope to join the Enrst & Young’s Global Financial Service team to manage your clients business risk effectively.  Additionally, I would be effective in working to improve their business performance, control and process oversight, and provide accurate consultation to the clients. I am positive that my assistance will ensure that the client’s financial reports and the information contained will reflect to shareholders and public accurate information. I am enthusiastic and passionate about analysis financial business issues I am a team player and love learning more about and understanding the operations of financial and banking industries, and the flat rate operational tax systems in HK.  I am certain that my skills would bring value to your organization.

Answer 3

sounds good to me, hun!

good luck

Answer 4

copy and paste it into microsoft word it will check spelling and grammer for you  

Answer 5

Please match it with your document carefully.

I am responding to your request to fill your Corporate Tax Associate or Audit associate position.

I hope to join the Enrst & Young’s Global Financial Service team to manage your clients business risk effectively. Additionally, I would be effective in working to improve their business performance, control and process oversight, and provide accurate consultation to the clients. I am positive that my assistance will ensure that the client’s financial reports and the information contained will reflect to shareholders and public accurate information. I am enthusiastic and passionate about analysis financial business issues I am a team player and love learning more about and understanding the operations of financial and banking industries, and the flat rate operational tax systems in HK. I am certain that my skills would bring value to your organization.

GFS team in EY attracts me because it provides excellent assurance & advisory service to its diverse top tier client, which can offer me excellent quality exposure experience only with EY, especially in my areas of interest like asset management, fund house, investments and the financial service companies. I m sure I could easily adjust myself at EY’s supportive environment. The supportive teamwork style would give me an opportunity to assist other junior colleagues in the future to showcase my leadership skills. I can also afford to travel to clients business, which makes work far more interesting. I am looking forward to joining the EYU career development program upon completion of CPA, and continuing to improve my skills through lifetime learning and I am sure only EY can offer this life long career oppurtunity.

BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR JOB

Answer 6

I am writing in regards to my keen interest in the Corporate Tax Associate or Audit associate position.

I would like to join the Enrst & Young’s Global Financial Service team to manage your Clients business risk effectively, to improve their business performance ensuring the controls and processes are working, and advice improvement on these functions to make sure that the client’s financial reports and information that they provide to the shareholders and public are accurate. I am enthusiastic and passionate to analyze financial business issues, to learn and understate the operations of financial and banking industries, and the flat rate operational tax systems in HK.

Answer 7

your letter is too wordy - and it is Ernst and Young.  Honestly keep it short and simple - it seems that you have just copied their mission statement.