Plz dont lett them die because you dont care! with out you they will die PLZ Help them they have no1 but you!!

Question

Have you ever heard of a puppy mill? Well if not take a look at this.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=gefyu3yw...

If you know what they are now! Think about your pets if you have any> would you want them to struglle like that???? THE ANSWER IS NO So i really hope that you help these animlas because they need you! With out your help they will all die soon! These dogs NEED YOU AND DEPEND ON YOU! All you have to do is sign this petition to stop dog abuse!

http://www.aspca.org/site/pageserve...

Imagine your pets being in all this! Are you gonna help them or do completly nothing?

PLZ HELP ME IF YOU SIGNED THE PETITION AND TELL ME WHAT yOU THINK OF PUPPY MILLS!!!!

REMEMBER YOUR PETS

THEY NEED YOU ANY TYPe OF DOG

PLZ HELP US REACH OUR GOAL

Answer 1

I had already sighned your petition on your previous post. Agen i believe that puppy mills should be banned and all the animals given an better chance in life.

Answer 2

As noble as your goal may be, this site is not for advertisting or promotion of other sites or personal agendas.  

Please note that incoherent and exaggerated rants are NOT an effective way to persuade your audience.  Laying wild guilt trips like "they will all die, you are the only person on the planet who can do something, and if you don't do it then you are a heartless person who doesn't care" is not fair or effective. You are actually hurting your own cause by posting pleas like this.

Instead, try targeting specific people you know and asking them to spread the word.  Copy the text straight from ASPCA website so that it is coherent, grammatical, and persuasive.