Plz help my deck!?

Question

Im just wondering if this deck is ok...its a fiend/zombie deck:

Monsters (18):

Raviel, lord of phantasms

Malice doll of demise

Summoned skull

Great Maju Garzett

Decayed commander

Zombie tiger

Giant Orc

Pyramid Turtle

Regenerating mummy

Vampire lord(I have 2)

Patrician of darkness

The Creator

Newdoria

Spirit reaper

Vampire lady

Zure,knight of dark world

Element doom

Spells (10):

A feather of the phoenix

Autonomous action unit

Lightning vortex

Ribbon of rebirth

Call of the mummy

Different dimension capsule

Ekibyo Drakmord

Premature burial

Reasoning

Monster gate

Traps (11):

Judgment of anubis

Trap jammer

Karma cut

Dark spirit of the silent

Cemetery bomb

Robbin goblin

Ordeal of a traveler

Magic jammer

Rising energy

Shadow spell

A hero emerges

Total Cards:39(i know im missing 1 card ill get that soon)

plz give me tips or anything thank you!!

P.S--can u rate my deck 1 to 10

Thank you!!

Answer 1

put in banisher of the light, dd different deminsion master, dd dynamite, and cemetary bomb.  That will accompany ur Great Maju Garzett and u can put in gren maju da eiza

Answer 2

it's alreedy good enofe!!