Plz help my yu gi oh deck!!!!?

Question

ok i went in to a tournament and i got 22nd out of 30...plz help my deck...

it is a fiend/ zombie

Monsters (20):

Dark Necrofear

Malice doll of demise

Summoned skull

Great Maju Garzett

Decayed commander

Zombie tiger

Giant Orc

Pyramid Turtle

Regenerating mummy

Vampire lord

Patrician of darkness

The Creator

Newdoria

Spirit reaper

Vampire lady

Zure,knight of dark world

Element doom

Shadow ghoul

Night assailant

La jinn the mystical genie of the lamp

Spells (10):

A feather of the phoenix

Monster reborn

Lightning vortex

Ribbon of rebirth

Call of the mummy

Different dimension capsule

Ekibyo Drakmord

Premature burial

Reasoning

Monster gate

Traps (10):

Judgment of anubis

Trap jammer

Karma cut

Dark spirit of the silent

Cemetery bomb

Robbin goblin

Ordeal of a traveler

Magic jammer

Shadow spell

A hero emerges

PLEASE tell me ways to improve!

10 points to best answer

Answer 1

i'll give you anything for that Dark nercofear

Answer 2

Ok first of all play pure zombie deck. Advice to give you is to get the zombie world deck(ocg structure deck). Put curse of vampire and foolish burial this is one of the most famous combos of zombie deck. And since zombie cards are tend to be dark attribute, dark creator would be great instead of creator but pls dun include that pure zombie pls.

Next, include spells like call of mummy, book of life ESPECIALLY book of life.

And no pls Ekibyo drakmord remove. It has no use in zombie deck, i dun  really like like it, it gave me alot of dead draws , same to magic jammer, most of the time when your opponent cast a spell this card would NOT appear so yeah, dun include it.

Zombie is a swarm and beatdown deck. No point having cemetery bomb.

Also Ordeal of a traveler would be better replace by traps wabuku,Mirror force, Magic cylilinder(easy to find) and sakerastu armor.