Plz help my yugioh deck?

Question

this deck was designed for tournament play

plz tell me which cards i shud add or remove

rate it

and tell me if its tournament ready

objectives are to use grepher/armageddon to send dasher and malicious to grave and get free special summons

i also need a way to deplete my opponents field presence

Monsters

• (x3) Dark Grepher

• (x2) Dasher

• (x2) Malicious

• (x2) Armageddon Knight

• Destiny Hero Disk Commander

• (x3) Destiny Hero Diamond Dude

• Destiny Hero Fear Monger

• Treeborn Frog

• Sangan

• (x2) Cyber Dragon

• Raiza

• Mobius

Magic

• Destiny Draw

• (x2) Allure of Darkness

• Lightning Vortex

• Brain Control

• (x3) Soul Exchange

• Reinforcement of Army

• Heavy Storm

• Monster Reborn

• Mystical Space Typhoon

• (x2) Smashing Ground

Traps

• (x3) Sakuretsu Armor

• Mirror Force

• Torrential Tribute

• Bottomless Trap Hole

Answer 1

ok. from what im seeing so far you are sort of running a dark armed return deck minus the dark armed dragons. if thats the case you need these:

+3 destiny draw

+3 dark armed dragon

+1 dark magician of chaos

+1 elemental hero stratos

+2 fear monger( for disk commander)

+1return from the different dimension

+2 escape from the dark dimension

+1 premature burial

+1 reinforcement

+1 crush card virus

+2 limit reverse( for disk commander)

now take these out:

-1 grepher

-1 diamond dude

- treeborn frog

-2 cyber dragons

- mobius

- raiza

- 3 soul exchange

-3 sakuretsu armour

- bottomless trap

- 1 brain control

so yea basically the idea of the deck is to get your cards quickly from your deck with your heavy draw powers ( allure, d draw and d commander) and you want to fill up your removed from play pile. but keep searching your deck and equalize your grave to 3 darks so that once ready you bust out as many dark armed dragons as you can in one turn to destroy the field. the, you use escape or return from the different dimension for the otk. i know this deck is a little pricy but you gotta pay if you wanna win.

hoped this helped

Answer 2

I say all but Treeborn  Frog. Don't lose the monster reborn.

Answer 3

well i'm not totally familiar with all the cards but with my deck i always try to keep out to many doubles.

Answer 4

no treeborn frog another destiny draw more traps cyclone blade d-chain my brother always uses that on me and it's really effective 8/10 lightnig vortex the more the better and toll would be good it's ready for tournaments it looks like my bro's he wins every tournament he enters except when i'm in one

Answer 5

i would take out mobius and raiza and add 3 of the dark monarche