Plz rate / fix my NEW yugioh dragon deck?

Question

monsters:

3x masked dragon

3x kaiser sea horse

2x mirage dragon

1x decoy dragon

1x felgrand dragon

1x twin-headed behemoth

1x spirit ryu

1x spear cretin

1x exiled force

1x darkblaze dragon

1x luster dragon (#1)

1x divine dragon - excelion

1x Blue eyes white dragon

1x lord of D

1x armed dragon lv5

1x white horned dragon

1x paladin of white dragon

1x chainsaw insect

spells:

2x flute of summoning dragon

1x heavy storm

1x premature burial

1x monster reborn

1x brain control

1x lightning vortex

1x white dragon ritual

1x burden of the mighty

1x fairy meteor crush

1x mage power

1x nitro unit

traps:

1x forced back

1x dimension wall

1x magic cylinder

1x chthonian blast

1x sakuretsu armor

1x light of intervention

1x a hero emerges

1x radiant mirror force

1x bottomless trap hole

1x dragon's rage

* I was also wondering if I can ritual summon from the deck or if it had to be from my hand?

Answer 1

a lot of cards, put in anoter lord of d and 2x blue eyes and blue eyes ultimate, blak luster blader and dragon master knight(if you can get it)      i give it a 8.5/10

Answer 2

You have to much cards, and if you are going to have armored dragon lv.5 you need the others to(atleast lv.3).

Answer 3

well u have alot of cards. and most only 1 of so u wont draw them often.

to answer ur question ritual must be from ur hand.

but if u use manju of ten thousand hands u get the ritual and the monster + since he is 4 stars paladin can just come out.

a couple hard tributes too. light of intervention would work better if u run 2 more with more armed dragons. it seems u want 2 work with the grave yard but with a deck like this my hand will burn out every duel. if u think of a way 2 stop that ill rate a 7/10. maybe u should add future fusion and five headed dragon. u can drop most of ur tributes then special summon them with cards like decoy dragon and monster reborn. then u get the big five headed dragon out.not sure what 2 take out since i dont know exactly how this deck works in a duel since draw probability of the cards you need  is low. work on that.

Answer 4

You can add some more Blue Eyes White Dragons, Lord of D, and also put in some Flute of Summoning Dragons. Other then that i give 8/10