Plz rate/ fix six samuri deck!?

Question

monsters 20

3 grandmasters

2 cyber

2 irou

3 yaichi

3 zanji

*1 enishi

2 spirt of the six samuari

*3 great shougun shien

1 kamon

spells 14

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Premature Burial

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Brain Control

1 Heavy Storm

*2 Reinforcement of the Army

*2 Six Samurai United

3 Reasoning

1 monster reborn

1 Lightening vortex

traps 6

3 pwwb

1 Toriental tribute

2 Dust tornado

Yeaaaa, finally, i traded my friend my zombie deck and some other cards for this deck and some other cards, lol. i put a star infront of any card i dont have but ill get them soon.

Plz dont recommend solmen judgment and mirror force as i am trying to get them. im lookiing more for a rating then fixes but if they are small fixes then its ok. plz rate out of ten.

Answer 1

i rate 8/10 1 change  -2 dusts +2 roars

Answer 2

just a few fixes cause your deck is looking pretty good

+1 irou

- 1 spirit

- 2 dust tornado (u've already got heavy and mst)

+ 3 cards of your choice

b4 fixes 7.8/10

with fixes 9/10 (maybe only 2 shogun aswell)

Answer 3

-2 spirit

-1 reasoning

-1 shogun (too many high level monsters)

+ irou

+1 kamon

+2 cunning

+ warrior returning alive (maybe)

7.5/10