Plz rate/improve this macro monarch deck?

Question

hey everyone, i need a little assistance with constructing my macro monarch deck. i just need some assistance with if i put the right cards in there and if i should take out/put in other cards. all help will be appreciated. thx in advance.

3x Caius the Shadow Monarch

3x Mobius the Frost Monarch

1x Raiza the Storm Monarch

1x White Horned Dragon

3x D.D. Survivor

3x D.D. Scout Plane

3x Cyber Valley

1x Exiled Force

1x Neo Spacian Grand Mole

1x Marshmallon

1x D.D. Warrior Lady

3x Dimensional Fissure

2x D.D.R.

2x Soul Exchange

1x MST

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Brain Control

2x Reinforcement of the Army

2x Nobleman of Crossout

3x Macro Cosmos

2x Bottomless Trap Hole

1x Magic Cylinder

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Return from the Different Dimension

Answer 1

Once again to those of you who do this, using so many copies of one card is not a good idea in the long run, because it takes away from overall first turn hand advantage, it may end up giving up hand and field management, and it definetly affects the overall success of the deck itself. Your deck is well constructed, but it could recieve a few changes. A card in the D.D. series that is used widely in the Shonen Jump Championship is D.D. Crow, which can be used from the hand to negate the special summon of a monster in your opponent's graveyard. Mobius the Frost Monarch used to be ever popular among the monarch cards, but now it is rarely seen in the SJC decks, being that most use only one copy if ever. You might want to consider dropping a copy each of Macro Cosmos and Dimensional Fissure, as well as a copy or two of D.D. Scout Plane unless you are using Bazoo the Soul-Eater. Drop a copy each of Soul Exhange and Reinforcement of the Army, add Spirit Reaper (it is effective in Macro decks because it limits hand management of the opponent and at the same time with the help of Macro Cosmos and Dimensional Fissure, removes the discarded card from play). Remove one Nobleman of Crossout because it has been recently restricted to Limited. Add Heavy Storm. Side deck and or main deck By Order of the Emperor, so when your opponent has no cards to remove etc. you can draw a card instead. Add a copy of Zaborg and Thestalos, Thestalos is more widely used because hand management means everything now. The rest of your deck is ok, you make any changes you feel are necessary after you decide on my recommendations.

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