Plz rate my yugioh beat down deck?

Question

I am thinking about changing to a beat down so here's my idea: (plz rate)

Monsters:

1x mystic tomato

1x cat's ear tribe

1x spear cretin

1x two-headed behemoth

1x giant rat

3x giant orc

2x indomitable fighter Lei Lei

1x goblin attack force

2x marauding captain

1x herald of creation

1x spirit reaper

1x exiled force

1x pitch-black warwolf

1x chainsaw insect

1x castle gate

1x yubel

1x yubel - terror incarnate

1x felgrand dragon

spells:

1x swords of revealing light

1x premature burial

1x monster reborn

2x reinforcement of the army

1x burden of the mighty

1x brain control

1x nobelman of crossout

1x heavy storm

1x lightning vortex

traps:

2x trap jammer

1x spirit barrier

2x sakuretsu armor

1x ordeal of a traveler

1x by order of the emperor

1x radiant mirror force

1x magic cylinder

1x dimension wall

* I've also been thinking of putting in Caius and vampire lord.

Answer 1

Weell! That is the best deck I've ever seen! I think you can knock out any opponent in your way! Atta boy! Now your the Master of the Decks!

Hope I'd help!

Answer 2

a lot of unnecessary cards, take out magic cylinder and swords of revealing light, you dont need to stall, just force your way through,

take out the yubels, you cant bring them out fast enough, dont waste time trying. get rid of your first 5 monster cards at the top. dont bother using muarding, dont need to stall. get rid of herld creator, fer dragon, and castle gate.

really rethink all your traps.

you really need to focus on beat down. simplify it, you have all these combos forced into teh deck and really they dont strenghten the beat down strategy.