Plz rate this beatdown deck ????????

Question

could this deck win a card shop terny

2x zaborg

1x raiza

3x mobius

1x thesalos

2x caius

3X goblin attack force

3x injectoin fairy lily

3x indomitable fighter lei lei

2x goblin elite attack froce

3x goblin black ops

spells

1x heavy storm

1x monster reborn

2x my body as a shield

1x premature burial

1x mystical space typhoon

1x nobleman of crossout

1x smashing ground

1x fissure

2x reinforcement of the arrmy

traps

3x rising energy

1x torrential tribute

3x dimension wall

1x bottomless trap hole

1x mirror force

Answer 1

Heh heh heh... I`ll show you a much more stronger deck... this deck is a beatdown deck that is combined with the forces of destruction... THIS IS THE TOTAL DESTRUCTION DECK!!!

Monsters: 20

Jinzo

Reflect Bounder

Gene-Warped Warwolf x3

Slate Warrior x3

Luster Dragon x2

Zaborg the Thunder Monarch x2

Ancient Gear Golem

Cyber Dragon x2

Chainsaw Insect x3

Man-eater Bug x2

Spells: 7

Swords of Revealing Light

Fissure

Heavy Storm

Nobleman of Crossout

Premature Burial

Lightning Vortex

Smashing Ground

Traps: 13

Dark Bribe x3

Mirror Force

Ultimate Offering

Torrential Tribute

Magic Cylinder

Bottomless Trap Hole x3

Sakuretsu Armor x3

Total: 40 Cards

Tips:

1. Use Dark Bribe wisely. (Ex. Use Dark Bribe only when your opponent activates a powerful spell of trap card like Heavy Storm.)

2. Only use Sakuretsu Armor and Bottomless Trap Hole for dangerous situations. ( Ex. use bottomless trap hole if your opponent summons his/her key cards.)

3. If you have torrential tribute in your first turn, set that trap card on the field and do not summon any monster until you used that torrential tribute to clear all monsters on the field     ( meaning, your opponents monsters.)

Answer 2

It would do okay but, if you are up against someone who spent a load of cash on his deck you might wanna reconsider.

Answer 3

I would think so, but someone might have spent a c**p load and have better