Plz read and tell me if its good or not?

Question

when the soul is lost

why is it when we see what we want we can not see what we need?what if you could not see what you want or need just what others want and need?what does it meen to have no wants and not be able to feel the need of your life?when does the wants and need of other make them self your wants and need?why do we feel others more then our self?if life is just a dream then why do we feel a need to wake to the world of need and want?if your life is more then what you feel does this meen there is more then what we see?what if this is it?what if this is it just becuz we say it is?

Answer 1

i like it and it is very nice

Answer 2

this is so relevant to the world today...very touching

Answer 3

If you don't mind I'll set it up in stanzas so it doesn't seem to run together and just run on. (note cannot is one word; meen is mean; themself; yourself; myself; ourself; because)-- always run a spell checker.

why is it when we see what we want we can not see what we need?

what if you could not see what you want or need just what others want and need?

what does it meen to have no wants and not be able to feel the need of your life?

when does the wants and need of other make them self your wants and need?

why do we feel others more then our self?

if life is just a dream then why do we feel a need to wake to the world of need and want?

if your life is more then what you feel does this meen there is more then what we see?

what if this is it?

what if this is it just becuz we say it is?

The list of questions, though a list poem, it doesn't catch my interest.  I'm sure others will find it fits their style and needs.

T.