Plz tell me what u think about my poem!

Question

When I’m With You”

Brittany Evanko

After I see you from a long day

Sometimes we have nothing to say

We just lie still and hear our hearts race together.

I feel as if time should stay still forever.

Feeling you brush your fingers through my hair,

I blink twice, just to believe you’re really there.

The taste of your kiss sends chills up my spine.

The feelings I have are too strong to define.

Your scent follows me even when you’re not there.

When I’m with you, nothing in this world can compare.

Answer 1

so deep i love it make a card with this lmaooooo.. =D

Answer 2

That is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!

VERY NICE!!

I would get it published if I were you!!

and make sure someone doesn't STEAL it from you and call it their own and get it published before you!!

Answer 3

I LIKE IT!

Answer 4

wow thats really good and i mean it i write poems every now and then but not as good as this one