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PoETRY !! if ur a good write help me out please =)?

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i need help writing a poem right now

so can some one write one for me

i want it to be about

me being in a bad realion **** with a guy im always fighting with and i stick with and and try to keep it going and not have us fighting untill one day i couldnt take it no morei was down and sad because she loveed him but she couldnt take it anymore then one day at the local pubilc swimming pool she met a guy with all the qualites she looked for and statred talking to him the o nly thing was he has a girl friends

and in this poem can u mention some about him have amazing sneaker game ( has good taste and multipule pais of sneaker )

thanxx so much 10 points for best poem i get

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  1. it was hard being with him

    he always had a look so grim

    we'd fight and fight with no retreat

    not even once was he so sweet

    i packed my bags and off i went

    said goodbye and that i meant

    no more fighting would i take

    no longer would my poor heart ache

    i took a swim and there he was

    our instant connection formed a buzz

    i wasn't the only one in this trance

    but i knew that i must give a chance

    his taste was shown via sneakers

    his words were smooth like through a speaker

    he was just right inside and out

    my heart knew it without a doubt

    hope you like it!


  2. write your own, it won't be from the heart if you don't.

  3. hmm ah no!

    write your own poem, if u want ot to be honest and heartfelt then who knows more about what your feeling than you?

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