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Poem, Answerss please!!thoughts???

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she left the party half past three. the rumors flew for someone thought it would be aball but no body knew how far she'd fall. there was no on to help her up, no one to take her hand. her pain was pain full, it was tearing students down, not on would take a stand.

with that the lady on the news said it all; the girl wouldn't be coming back to school,not that day,not ever. the whispers stopped, no eyes met, the stares dropped.

it all started with a little drama. they said they hated it.

but they created it.

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  1. Check your spelling..."no on" should be spelled "no one"

    Poetry is poetry, in all honesty I've seen worse. Here's an "A" for effort.

    read the words here:  

    THAT is poetry.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CpjKPy64N...

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