Poem, Please rate it?

Question

Man- Pac- Man.

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Eating dots ain’t so nutritious

Chasing ghosts, they’re oh so vicious-

At least until I hit a corner (they scatter, disordered)

Man Pink-y is sure delicious

When caught I fold up like a lie

As the sun does in some cloudy skies

Level 2, The best you can do?

You score seems to never rise.

Please don’t kick, Karate Chop-pa

The Game machine, if you lose a-lot-ta

Hey buck, I‘m not the one that sucks.

Out of quarters? :( WAKA WAKA

Answer 1

Dude,

Sure know how to do your math,

Counted change, levels, and points,

you gave me a heck of laugh,

gotta go b4 Ms.Pac Man robs my cash,

and waka waka my ***

Answer 2

the poem is really good, a very good idea and you know a fair bit about pack man as simple as it is, you should work on the last paragraph a bit though you drift off in that one, you were doing good that each paragraph was its own little game part, rework the last paragraph and you will do fine

Answer 3

oddly enough i liked it... WTHell?

how wierd though... but not bad not bad at all.. lmao

Answer 4

Now try and say it in a free form pattern......