Poem - A Pensive Saturday - What Do You Think?

Question

As I sit here

listening to

Pink Floyd

from some

unknown year

I wonder where

freedom has

relocated

and disappeared

I contemplate

and remember

bygone days

of unchained

give and take

I must awake

this cocoon stage

and face life

before it is

too late

Answer 1

...my astonishment at seeing such rare poetic prowess in another does not deter from the fact, nor change my mind concerning the knowledge I have, that your poetry doth not compare I say to the beauty within the cocoon that is soon to become a butterfly... a delicate colorful representative of flitting flight. Your freedom will soon be at its apex in your life, for you will be blessed with the wings to carry you to any place you desire.

... maybe I exaggerated a little bit, but I enjoyed writing this comment... much, much, much.

Answer 2

pretty good ; )

Answer 3

Wrap me tight in a cocoon of love and poetry until the Mars shuttles is ready for lift-off.

Answer 4

love it! awsome poem!

Answer 5

Come with me and the Poets of Mars; it will happen, I promise you.

Answer 6

Stay in the cocoon for a while. It's Saturday. It'll be Monday before you know it! ;-)

Answer 7

I like it-simple and eloquent

Answer 8

Very beautiful poem, Marguerite. We all must get out of that cocoon and face whatever we've been hiding from at one point or another. I love this part:

I contemplate

and remember

bygone days

of unchained

give and take

Answer 9

Very nice Thankyou.l Enjoyed it.

Answer 10

You're not in a cocoon stage at all.  You're a beautiful butterfly.

Answer 11

A larvae-ly poem!

Answer 12

Wow its really cool .. i llove it ..

i like the way that it half rhymes ..

its great .. well done !!

Answer 13

I'm with Buk on this one.

I too think I liked it. You made me smile on an early Saturday morning.

Thanks.

:)

Answer 14

The freedom is there on Mars.

Answer 15

The meaning is awesome and the words are good, too.

Answer 16

Well said Marg' its a bit difficult though init?

I need a kick sometimes.

Answer 17

I think I liked it.

Answer 18

How true, my little chrysalis...

Answer 19

Lovely written words of wisdom.