Poem...A brothers Decay..tell me what you think please...?

Question

Photographs flood back as the current begins,

And I'm sailing on a ship made of burnt skin,

My body is stiff as it's been dried out for days,

Surrounded by water but I can't bare to taste...

I dont know what it is, but I know where to get it,

A feeling of happiness that I don't deserve,

But for tonight I shall spoil myself,

As I drink enough poison to learn how to feel.

I had a brother once he was my best friend,

But it's funny how God portrays the End,

He died on the sidewalk where we would play,

And the drunk driver, ******* got away,

So tell me my God, why should I believe,

It's just me and the great wide open sea,

I'm strandard alone and I'm happier now,

Cause him, I cannot live without..

Answer 1

Very sad, very heartfelt.

If this is True,you have dealt with it beautifully

in your use of words.

Though I Think the "F" word should be replaced.

Well done for a nice and easy read.

Sorry if indeed this is in memory of your brother.

God can not be blamed for the loss of

many Lives,He is There to receive us

It is not in his power to stop drunk drivers or any other of Mans doing!