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Poem... Help! Needs something.?

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I like the direction this is going, but it needs something. Feedback? Thanks.

Second guessing

Hopes and dreams

Never helped anyone

I’ll follow my heart

I’ll listen to my soul

My destiny is calling

But here I stand

Wanting to run

Yet hesitant

I don’t know why

Everything I’ve ever wanted

Is right in front of me

Why is it so hard?

For me to take

What I want

What I deserve

What is meant for me?

I need…

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  1. Is it that I need

    To hear you say

    Go ahead, it's okay?

    or

    I need my decision

    to be approved by you

    Since what I do, I do

    For me

    And for you, too.

    or

    I need only the courage

    To take that first step.


  2. By leaving the last line as it is ("I need…") - you are leaving the "question" open. It implies that what is needed - is not known at this time - which is okay in my opinion. ♥

  3. some one to tell me

    that they need me

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