Poem: How would you catch your mind if you lost it?

Question

It`s running and you can`t catch it.

Your staying behind and it`s still racing.

It`s gone now.

Your lost now.

Your mind is mine.

I`m the winner of this race.

I`m the owner of your mind now.

I am your addiction.

8/01/2008

Have fun with this one if you will. I don`t feel like editng it right now. This is how I penned it, and it`ll be lucky if it gets edited, lol

Answer 1

If you are going to write a love poem, try one with a chain! lol  

You know your mine, your mind

I am your addiction, chase me now

and catch me, if you can...if you can

catch me, for your mind is mine.

Answer 2

My dear I lost, misplaced, my mind many years ago. One of these autumn days in my life, perchance I shall locate it! (Then again, I've always been the optimist.)

Nice pen.

Answer 3

"Hi!",

lovely love poem.

Done well.

I like what you have written already.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 4

You caught me at addiction. I'm typing on mine right now..I'm lost and can't get back my sanity : ) Very good free verse.