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Poem I Just Wrote. What Do You Think?

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Far Over The Hill

She sits in complete silence,

thinking only in her head.

Still she worries

and thinks of what shes said.

She cries tears of regret,

though never looking back.

She knows what she has to do,

to get back on track.

She'll change whats shes made

of herself and her life.

She'll change the mistakes

she thought would go right.

She'll change all the things

shes ever done and said.

She'll change what she thinks

deep inside her creative head.

Her heart rules her head,

these feelings must be real.

She knows somethings wrong,

and there is no strong appeal.

She'll confront him of her feelings,

and make him confess,

to what hes thinking and all the rest.

Things will change.

She knows they will.

Things will be alright

from here and far over the hill.

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  1. That was awesome.  Keep them coming!!


  2. Its beautiful! Did you write more, if so, please email them to me, I would love to read them! Great Job!

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  3. amazing!

    i write too.

  4. wow, that was incredible!

    it was so powerful, and it was pretty easy to understand!

    keep writing, you have a gift :)

  5. very good.

    i like it.

    yes, keep writing!

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