Poem I wrote, what do you all think? Criticism welcome, as always.?

Question

Nationalism is simply pride in

symbolism,

perception is all to be what it was meant

to be seen as,

through Your eyes, alive and aflame with

shining legacies,

turned on and licked bruised filled with

ecstasy.

What has been broken down in the corridors

of the mind,

can be found eating away at the massive

ego overdose,

where's the 15th heavenly chapel in h**l,

it can only be spotted

from the depths of the center of the cone

in the middle eye.

Futuristic orgasms set on fire oil spreading

down and out,

putting forth the complex human psyche

and sinking in.

Embedded deep in the naked huddled moist

depths to be plumbed,

by mystics and the oriental,

silver chimes twine in harmony while

mats hand-woven soft smooth baby senses

touch taste scent mind is made anew,

the planet is seemingly far away, now,

I'm having bits and bits of the same

rhythm coursing in and throughout myself,

Heaven and h**l are Earthly perceptions

seen and touched and felt and tasted,

it’s already here.

Answer 1

Illusions of who and what we are is what I read from this, which may not be your intent but it was my take.  Interesting images and thoughts.

Answer 2

wow that was deep, i love it

very good choice of words too =]

Answer 3

Excellent poem in my honest opinion. I thought it was very well written and illustrated. What I most liked about it was the flow of words, very fluid, but the single thing that [for me anyway], seemed to break the flow was 'massive

ego overdose' - I've no idea why though. Truly thought provoking, excellent poetry, you much deserve to have your poetry published. =]