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Poem/Song about heart/mind

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Summer's days are ending, the beaches begin to clear

My mind is filled with doubt,

and my heart is filled with fear

I don't know whats right,

Or what I should do.

Because every night

all I can dream of

Is you.

Some say test the waters

Dive in deep

Some say burn my bridges

And go back to sleep

But what I will do is left up to me

If only my head and heart would agree

I can't see the beginning or end

The time has come,

I can no longer pretend

that you and me are just friends...

Because what I feel transcends

what always takes place...

When I forget everything,

And see your face

Some say test the waters

Dive in deep

Some say burn my bridges

And go back to sleep

But what I will do is left up to me

If only my head and my heart would agree

I don't know whats left to say

I don't know whats left to do

I don't know how to explain

What I need to...

So listen to this song, look deep within your heart

Tell me what you think, before we are torn apart.....

It's our decision, not his, hers, or their's

I just need to know,

If your the answer to my prayers...

So I think I'll test the waters

I'll dive in deep

I think I'll cross my bridges

Instead of going to sleep.

It's always been left up to me

I think I'll take a chance

Though my head and heart disagree..

Tell me what you think...I don't have music to it yet but I'm not sure if there's any parts i could change to make it flow better let me know what you think honestly...

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  1. Awesome lyrics. I think it's a great love song; try a soft piano flow of music with your unique word play. I believe your song/poem will inspire many.


  2. Not worth reading, because it's not a song, it is lyrics

  3. well i tryed singing it because i love to sing poetry lol umm when you  you say       if only my head and my heart would ever agree with me      try that  

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