Poem: To Thee No More. What do you think?

Question

I used to write poems all the time. I have probably written over 1000, but it has been awhile. I wrote this one about 5 minutes. Tell me what you think. Should I continue with my art?

To Thee No More

As walking in a desert land

Across a barren sea of sand

I search my love to find once more

My heart belongs to thee no more

I stand abrupt in thy true sight

And stand alone with all my might

But thee I have no more to give

For our love no more to live

I walk across the golden sand

This desert vast, without your hand

I stand my actions, take my ground

Without your love, no more be found

Once in love to thee abound

No more my love, no more is found

I search my love to find once more

My heart belongs to thee no more

Answer 1

Yeah man keep writing this is great, nice love poem. I've been trying to write a good one of my own for awhile now.

Answer 2

Yehh you should definitely keep writing that was great =]

girls will digg you if you can write that good lol

Answer 3

Excellent...sad and poignant

Answer 4

This is excellent!

It tells a universal tale and in the beauty of poetry.

10/10  

Sincerely a real treat to read.

T.