Poem about my dad (please rate and read!)?

Question

You say he’s not good enough

And you tell me we can do better

His heart isn’t big enough

To fit a family in there

He tried to change

And he simply couldn’t stop

But he’s my dad

and you never let him talk

Was it the way he looked at you

When you gave him all your c**p

Or the way he glared at you

When you turned your back?

Don’t you see, what you did

To drive him away?

You say he’s not good enough

But you didn’t ask him to stay

I noticed there's somewhat of a rhyme going on- idk if i like that. Please tell me what you got out of it, your thoughts and what you rate it. :D

Answer 1

would rate it a 4. it sounds good. no lie.

Answer 2

Very profound.

Great writing

Answer 3

i like it.

i think its pretty good.

please answer the question i asked pleeaase...

Answer 4

it's nice..

reminds me of my parents!

Answer 5

this is very good, i can feel your hurt through your words.

Answer 6

Really good. Keep writing.

Answer 7

Nice!! I read one of your other poems- you should keep being a poet- Girls like me know these things!

Answer 8

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

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