Poem about religion?

Question

ok, it probably sucks, but just wondering for opinions. its supposed to tell about corruption in religious leaders. its not meant to badmouth religion.

Go to bed. Go to sleep.

Wake up now. That’s so cheap.

Why so sad? Wipe that frown.

Listen here! Go lay down.

Now get up. Now go back.

Clean my floor. Cut that slack.

Don’t be bad. Good boys win.

Follow me. Leave that sin.

I said so. Now obey!

Honest, kid. It’s G-d’s way.

Answer 1

Roses are red

The Ocean is blue

Christians are gullible and insecure

and want you to be too..

Answer 2

Agree..

Answer 3

True :)

Answer 4

You seem to be happy in your own small world. Try expanding your horizon.

Answer 5

God made me an atheist. Who are you to question his wisdom?

Don't write about religion, we all know the truth, but some are more willing to see it for what it is.