Poem...any comments?

Question

a poem that i just feel its unfinished....any comments?

i am weak now

having attempted to

cry out all feelings and

emotions for you:

In one breath you

make me smile and cry

in one phone call you

lift my spirits and

plunge me into depression

Your voice can build up

my hopes and shatter my dreams

You leave me wondering, yet

disenchanted.

How you do it,

I'll never know.

And that you do it

I'll never breathe a clue

At least not to you

Answer 1

not bad.i always like a good poem. thanks.

Answer 2

That was very good. Sometimes poems left unfinished are fine that way but if you want to end it, go ahead and end it. I really did love it though.

Answer 3

wow very good

i really liked it

do youlike mine:

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Answer 4

I like it, man.  It's raw and emotional, keep it up while you're inspired.