Poem by me.. opinions?

Question

past suicide and present love

i use to love death because i hated this life i possesed

thinking making cuts on my wrist would relieve some stress

it only brought more pain on me behind my locked door

regreting the things i did repeating what did i do that for

i had made my misery one of my closest of bestfriend

because it seemed like the only thing that didnt pretend

my nights consisted of a pillow filled with wet tears

mornings were nothing but anger i had survived another year

but now ive found my happy he eliminates all my pains

so meant to be hes the blood that flows through my veins

the chemistry we share it seems too good to be true

i swear i will never forget our first i love you

my views of life are now in a whole new perspective

no longer will i be alone engaging to introspective

a whole new person i am. im all smiles, ear to ear

i thank you for that and i promise you i will continue to be here

by me.

what do you think?honesty please let me know the goods and bad about it

Answer 1

it's so nice....there's so much emotion and i can see exactly what you were going through

Answer 2

Nice Poem

Answer 3

besides the fac that its... highly depressing, its.. not.. bad.

why is every poem ppl want critque on about death/blood/suicide/...cutting?

Answer 4

It's really good I can really see that this is a personal poem and you put feeling in it. Good Job! Keep Writing.