Poem....critque! Thanks?

Question

I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun,

Stop pointing all your fingers at what everyone has done,

You have your own problems so don't complicate the truth,

Cause in the morning I will wake and see what I've been through.

I wrote a poem and it consisted of you,

All the words were made of ink that looked so untrue,

So I crawled into a hole just to keep myself warm,

I'm hiding from your lies and accusations.

I held onto your hand for a h**l of a ride,

Now I'm looking at the feelings as they all subside,

Into a mess thats on your front porch,

So clean it all up and I'm the only ****.

I had a favorite song but it's such a shame,

I can't listen to it anymore, it's all the same,

It reminds me of you and everything we've done,

So I know it's freezing but I can't help the sun.

Answer 1

Great....keep writing

Answer 2

OMG I LOVE IT!

IM NOT JUST SAYING THAT!

trust me its good

Answer 3

I may not know all about 'peom writing', but I really got the message from yours.  Good going.

Answer 4

omg!

i love it :D

you need to send that in for like a poem book or make your own!

write more

i want more more more!

" I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun "

Answer 5

that was AWESOME! i LOVED it! and i dont throw that word around too freely. ; )

Answer 6

Wow is all I can really say. Actually I can say it was extremely fantastic. I can't wait to hear more.

Answer 7

wow!

that is absolutely amazing.

you're a great writer.

Answer 8

Nice

Answer 9

I absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Can I steal;"I know it's getting freezing but I can't help the sun,

Stop pointing all your fingers at what everyone has done," from you? plzplzplz its very cool!!!!!