Poem do u like >?

Question

Sad i fall when no one calls

i am all alone i hope to hear

that phone ring near but have no hope

to carry on the ups and downs you turn me around

and yet u never near i

sleep and ache if all my fate to tomorrows

sorrow scene i break on down to the

ground because of all

you do

Answer 1

i like it, nice

Answer 2

Wow that's really deep, it's like you can feel it, it's really powerfull i can relate...well done x

Answer 3

very nice and sad but I would suggest that you check the grammar and the wording and try to make it a little more understandable but good job anyways!

Answer 4

thats good