Poem help?! one line:)?

Question

ok,

'you've never failed at putting a smile on my face

and erasing the tears....'

i'm stuck.

and i want it to rhyme.

10 points to best line.

Answer 1

and erasing the tears that come from this place.....

I don't know, I'm not much of a poet. Sorry.

Answer 2

and erasing the tears when i can't feel your embrace.

Answer 3

"You've never failed at putting a smile on my face

and erasing the tears while in your warm embrace"

Hope this helps. :)

Answer 4

I think it is perfect the way it is.  I'm impressed.  When people start trying to rhyme. they usually end up with a stupid sounding poem.

The best rhyming poem I have ever read is "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe.  H uses several types of rhymes which help the flow; for instance, internal rhymes.

It take delving deep into your brain to fond the perfect rhyming word, and that is difficult.

Answer 5

You helped my get through the strife

I've acknowledged my fears