Poem help please.?

Question

I gaze out into the midnight sky

A full moon waits to rise

Only under its glare

Can I escape from fear

The thoughts of death and dispair

Seem to disappear

I start to feel calm

As the moon holds me in its palm

Help. I need help with a title and maybe some more to add to it.

Answer 1

chicken chop suey

the meat tastes gooey

because they choke their chickens like the hong kong phooey

Answer 2

As the moon holds me in its palm

Can I escape from fear

I start to feel clam

Only under its glare

When the thought of death and dispair

Seem to disappear

As I glaze out into the midnight

I could see the moons light

thats my little remix of ur poem. i like urs better ^^ lol

the tittle of ur poem should be..hmmmm...The Moon's Glare

Answer 3

well you have personified the moon. so mayb a reference to it being human in the title?

you need to describe the moon more. considering its the focus of the poem there is nothing to describe it.

  A fading pale eyeball

  casting light, i watch it fall

  beneath the stars

resting on the horizon.

i have used enjambent, a metaphor, and  personification

of the moon. (i have also described the moon!)

Answer 4

submit it on fictionpress.com you'll get better suggestions there than here.