Poem help .......... ?

Question

Wonder, who recently had his heart torn out by a terribly heart-wrenching traumatizing experience, is attempting to console himself with poetry.

This is what I have so far:

"Sometimes when we touch,

The honesty's too much,

And I have to close my eyes and hide.

I want to hold you til I die,

Til we both break down and cry,

I want to hold you, til the fear in me subsides"

Any thoughts .... ? Suggestions ... ?

* crying and woeful *

Answer 1

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=LTnq268y2m...

Answer 2

That was a good song, but maybe you could write something original.

Answer 3

how about:

I will not cry when you die

I will laugh and get high

I will sleep with your brother Guy

And that's no lie

Answer 4

Good song, maybe you should sing the song to Wonder

Answer 5

Celeste made me cry. She truly understands.

Answer 6

You should put it on toast and sell it for a dollar.

mmmm sappy 80's music sandwiches.

Answer 7

Wonderful song dear Wonder. I can't even make a suggestion except that Celeste is awesome in hers. LMAO

Answer 8

Roses are Red,

Violets are Blue.

If my balls where on your chin,

what would you do?

Answer 9

Great song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nicely done

Answer 10

Uh...

Big orange kitties are soft and furry and are WONDERful to touch and hug?  

<<<----- (bites his brother kitty on the asss for being soft and furry and orange)

***brother kitty cries*****

Answer 11

"At times I'd like to break you and drive ya to your knees, at times I'd like to breakthrough and hold ya endlessly" (Sob! Cry) Wonder touches my soul with poetry...

Answer 12

*cries to hard to answer*