Poem help?

Question

I have been told time and again

That wishes just lead to a disappointing end

I refused to listen to what I believed wasn’t true

And so I just kept on wishing for you

I wished under every tunnel that came way

Hoping that you would return someday

I wished with each dandelion flower I blew

Hoping that somehow you’d come into view

I have been told time and again

That wishes just lead to a disappointing end

I tried not to listen to what I wished wasn’t true

And so I just kept on wishing for you

I wished with every fallen lash on my cheek

But every thought of you just made me weak

I wished on the first star I would see at night

Hoping that one day I would be all right

I have been told time and again

That wishes just lead to a disappointing end

I opened my ears and believed that was true

Since none of my wishes came true for you

Poem ideas? I know it's not that good. It' just a draft. I was bored and decided to write something.

Answer 1

Ur poem is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... coool i mean look at ur poem its the best i ever heard.

Answer 2

If thats not that good and just a draft I can wait to see what you can really do when you really do what you do?

I think its shweet!

Your modest aren't you

Answer 3

sorry if this isn't much help but i thought i'd tell  you that i like it and it is really good. im a total stranger so you know that im not lying

Answer 4

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM

Amazing first draft

10/10

Answer 5

r u kidding me?! I luv it !!