Poem i wrote for a girl i like, how do i give it to her?

Question

im 15, shes 13, in 2 days time we have a school event (athletics carnival)

weve been hanging out a lot at school and txting each other a lot, i wrote this for her today and im wondering what you think of it and ideas on how/when to give it to her or wether i should leave it in her bag etc...

When I hold you close to me,

My soul cries tears of bliss,

Somehow I know it’s meant to be,

A moment as beautiful as this,

The most radiant stunning smile,

Your hair of golden brown,

I think about it all the while,

But then I solemnly frown,

Your words, they me make me smile,

On the inside and the out,

It’s true they make me smile,

But I’m also full of doubt,

For you’re the beauty, I’m the beast,

I’m the slave and you’re my queen,

My feelings for you matter the least,

When together we cannot be seen,

When I think about them closely,

My adoring feelings of you,

What I think about mostly

Are your beautiful eyes of blue.

(written and copyright to me)

Answer 1

just 15... and already such intense feelings. I hope you arent playing a trap.right?

About the poem... Its really nice, soft spoken & lovable. The girl will definately like it.

Hand it over on a time, when you feel she is in calm mood.. not in party mood or funny mood or angry mood.... Any time will do. Dont forget to tell her, to reply. Also tell us the reply...!! lol

Good luck.

Answer 2

I think Its sweet, it just might creep her out a little.

I think you should wait until you are actually dating to give it to her.

Answer 3

If she knows you like her, and if you can win a stuffed animal at the athletic carnival then win one and either rubber band or find a way to attach the note to it and present it to her. If you cant win a stuffed animal at the carnival, then buy one and a single rose and wrap the note around the stem of the rose.

Answer 4

Nice poem... anyways.. yeah my best advice would simply to leave it in mail box (if you know her address) or put it in her locker with a evelope with her name written on it.  Or.. just simply catch her during lunch and give it to her directly . EXAMPLE " hey this is for you.. I wrote it last night before I went to bed" "I hope you like it". Gluck.

Answer 5

dont.

seriously.

its creepy.

dont.

Answer 6

Poems can be cute, but I think you should express your feelings in a different way. That poem would scare me away. It's a little too dramatic.

Answer 7

Take this advice from a man... NEVER give this sort of thing to a girl until your in the close to marriage stage.  And even then this kinda thing can backfire on you.  Yes there are women who want this stuff (poems and singing her songs) But its more of a checklist of things they want a guy to do and they never have any intention of going anywhere with this guy.   Women write this stuff and men read Playboy..

Answer 8

that's cute =].

i love itttt.

i wish a guy would write me a poem.

Answer 9

Wow. That's really nice for a 15 year old. I've heard much much older guys completely suck at the poem thing but you've got it down.

You should either hand it to her in person or hide it somewhere where you KNOW she, and only she, will find it. And make sure she can easily tell it's from you and to her if you hide it for her. A problem with hiding it though is that she may not clean out her bag or look in the desired spot. Meaning she will never find it. Definitely make more than one copy in case you loose the original.