Poem i wrote please voice your opinion..?

Question

Just You

Why would you want to be someone else

When you could be better by being yourself

Why pretend to be someone you are not

When you have something they haven't got

Cheating yourself of the life you have to live

Deprives others of that only which you can give

You have much more to offer by just being you

Than walking around in someone else's shoes

Trying to live the life of another is a mistake

It is a masquerade; nothing more than a fake

Be yourself and let your qualities show through

Others will love you more for being just you

Remember that God loves you just as you are

To him you are already a bright shining star

Family and friends will love you more too

If you spent time practicing just being you.

Thanks for reading!

Answer 1

i absolutly love it! great writing

Answer 2

Ehmagawd that's really good x10! You should totally become a poet. I normally don't like poetry and that was just sooooo good!

Answer 3

I just love your writing soo much! I've read 3 of your poems. Your quite a poet. Emil me sometime and we can exchange poems [e-mail].

Answer 4

wow, it sounds like a beautiful song. very true and heartfelt. you should try to get it published.