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Poem -- idk what to call it :) opinions?

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thanks :)

i'm sitting here,

the lense a cyclop eye

the whole world just

go ahead and pass me by

i don't mind

If this scene could hold

or just a second,

while i capture it,

that would be fantastic

the rain's so expressive

the colors, the depths,

the spirit and magic

does anyone see that

too, cause i always do

this world is always spinning

and you're always spinning past

but i don't mind

as long as you'll stop a bit

so i can catch a kiss

i don't mind

I swear everything's so right

like the breeze in the sky

and i'm slowly swinging

while the world just turns

the world's my mother

i must've been born

from the sky and dirt

i'd like to capture

everything on mother earth

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  1. Photograph?

    I don't mind?

    Mother Earth?


  2. Shutter

  3. Hi, Helloronii,

    I like this one -- Simply stated, straightforward, but with much to consider.  And thoughtfully positive, which I like very much.

    As for a name, how about just calling it "Sitting"?

    barjesse37

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