Poem in search of critique.?

Question

Cliché Little Girl

Disgraced, misplaced, a little angel far away

Bloody hands, footsteps in the sand

Her light a wave, crashing into infinity

Cliché little girl

Your dreams are broken and

Your wings are furled

Cliché little girl

Your innocence was never meant to last

Life

Is the dance she loves to lead

Is the hope she dies to deceive

Is the dream she longs to feel

She bleeds, without feeling

Her hope is losing ground

She screams at the ceiling

Her nightmares unbound

Cliché little girl

Your dreams are broken and

Your wings are furled

Cliché little girl

Your innocence was never meant to last

Answer 1

it's all really good but the last line is a little awkward sounding. good job though