Poem number two. please rate! lol thank you very much!?

Question

my heart longs for your image

pleads to hear your voice

but do you know how i feel?

i don't really have a choice

when our eyes meet

my heart beats in rapid pounds

how can you win my heart when it was never the prize

but it was yours for the taking

threw my tearing eyes

maybe i can forget you

just turn my eyes away

but we go deeper

don't we?

its hard for me to say

i never had a chance did i?

you became the predator

i was your prey

but then as you beggan to love me back

someone stole your gaze away

so now i have to let you go

pretend i never cared

i'll just try to forget everything

forget the laughs we shared

maybe someday

you could be mine

these fresh wounds can heal in time

i love you forever

if it helps you sleep

no matter what you do

i'll always keep

this promise

sealed with a kiss

just one more night

of sleepless bliss

and it feels so good

to let you go

my whole heart screams Amen

and now you know

my testimony

of the spell you cast

these dark days lay only in the past

still love you.

Answer 1

wow your really good at writing poems i like this one its really nice! :)