Poem...ode to black beauty?

Question

when i was a little girl

my head was full of stars

i dreamed of magic ponies

and of someday wearing bras

i read about black beauty

and saw thunderhead three times

i studied my friend flicka

and learnt by heart the horsey rhymes

the message that they gave me

was there in white and black

"love your horses heaps and heaps

and they will love you back"

so when the long awaited day arrived

and of course the pony too

i lavished him with affection

and waited to see what he would do

i gave him heaps of t*t bits

sugar and things that might

make him love me dearly

but all he did was bite

i built a lovely stable

which he looked at in disdain

and unless i locked the ruddy door

he'd prefer to stand out in the rain

i wouldn't have barbed wire fences

or none of that dangerous caper

but instead of a home loving pony

i got the worlds best escaper

i show him the saddle and bridle

to say "we're off for a ride"

but he'd bolt off down the paddock

to find a place to hide

more to come

Answer 1

Ha ha...love the tweenie sarcasm too!

*Or am I the only one that detects it?*

Answer 2

LOL Thats GOOD!!!! LOL

Answer 3

Lmao, that was HILARIOUS!!

Great rhyming, and that was a PERFECT way to end it, too. It made me laugh, for sure! It was a bit long, though way worth it!

* !!Have a star!! *

Answer 4

omgggg that is an awesome poem, i love it hahaha, especially the last 2 lines, how long did it take you to write that?? mannnnn you have talent :):)  defff STAR for you. :D and keep on writing poems like that :)

Answer 5

he he he he, wish I could write poems, I dont have the rhyming gene.......lol

Answer 6

Love it!  have a star...

Answer 7

Hehehe!!! Love it Redial!

Star for you!

Answer 8

bit to long

Answer 9

OMG - I really did laugh out loud.

That's brilliant - I think I might have to give you 2 stars !

Edit> Um, you tell me ....

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